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Mark Crutchfield's avatar

There's a quietly fierce yet deeply feminine power to this piece, Moll.

Whispers in the present pull us into the distant past through love, war, heartbreak — even sorrow — but with an emotional undercurrent that carries the reader along with the drumbeats of the battlefield.

The love, the longing, the restraint — it shows us how love is felt and carried, but not indulged. It reminds me of the strength that women carry silently, bravely, through time and memory, but not always told.

The buoyancy of the ship, almost in time with their breath, the creaks of lust — they add to the depth of those bittersweet moments loved.

A wonderful new emotional episode.

Leaves me wondering if Dora can bear the ongoing risk of falling for soldiers…

Or if she needs a little more stability?

Get the pun 😉

Darkly Dreaming Klar Nett's avatar

Moll you write so exquisitely well, the sensory detail made me feel everything Dora was feeling without ever veering into the purple prose territory. I love how you convey your characters' experiences so elegantly. This could be published tomorrow and would not be out of place on the shelves among well regarded genre fiction. A lovely special! But sadly didn't fix my Jack craving soooo... Onto the next one.

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